“The Lady, or the Tiger?” Continuation

. . . . . .

He went to the door on the right, opened it. He was astounded. Had it been the tiger, he would have been pieces already. The astonishment had deprived him from the enjoyment of survival. As if it was the princess herself. He looked at the scenery a second time. He thought that the distress had driven him insane. The lady approached him. He was trying to come to his senses. It was after the lady embraced him and he lost the amazing sight that he realized what had happened -or better to say not happened.

The warmth, the smell, the breath, the caress, the feeling, everything was exactly those of the princess. For one fleeting moment, he felt as if he was dreaming. While clasping her tightly, in order not to let his sweet dream escape, he looked up to see if the princess was still there, watching the scene. The princess was present. He saw the princess glaring at him furiously, typical of any woman watching her lover enfolding and enfolded. But he still could not let the lady go. He was attached to the pleasant feeling. He had experienced it several times before. He knew the sensation so well that he could be sure it was the princess he was embracing. But his logic opposed him. The lady was silent. The man was afire to hear her voice.

The shouts of joy and celebration soon rose from the multitude. The couple was surrounded by the crowd. The noise and commotion did not allow him to realize what was happening. The wedding was literally taking place. He so much desired the princess. He was hesitant whether to be sorrowful or not, for everything about the lady was precisely the same as the princess’ and in addition to that, the princess was far beyond his reach. Considering the brutal king, their unity was beyond imagination. Not having the chance to be with his beloved anymore, being with someone so similar to her was sheer bliss, the best he could have. The multitude was continuing the celebration, totally indifferent to the couple. Finally, after all the ceremonial sequences the couple was escorted to their home.

At last, they were all by themselves. The man did not seem disappointed, for he had received something exactly resembling what he had always craved. On the other hand, the lady did not look pleased. It was not that she did not like the man, every girl in that area wanted to have his company. The lady, who struggled so hard to reach that point, was disappointed at the man’s delight. The lady, who had searched enough to find a girl just like the princess and took risks to switch the position of the two, was the princess herself.

Now, she was wondering whether the love of the man for her was genuine. The man who did not seem so sad for having lost the princess and who appeared to be satisfied with being given one apparently like the royal one. The lady was totally confused, was not sure what to do.

The question of her decision is one not to be lightly considered, and it is not for me to presume to set myself up as the one person able to answer it. And so I leave it with all of you. What did the lady do, — stayed, or left?

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26 Responses to “The Lady, or the Tiger?” Continuation

  1. sogol says:

    Noooo!!an other question?? :’( :’(

  2. Rez(A) says:

    Very well put and descried!
    and ending it with another question, nice, man!!!

  3. Rahil says:

    Wow very creative!! I liked it! ecxept that question at the end! Anyway I think she stayed and they lived happily ever after! their feelings were temporary I guess! they were just newly wedds! =))
    your’s is happier than mine! I killed both of them!:D

    • ShFooladray says:

      I am not sure what I’d do if I were in her shoes.
      and I kinda like killing them both, that sounds pretty tragic and cool at the same time :D post your story somewhere so we get to read it, thanksss a lot.

  4. Nasrin says:

    Wow..
    I really enjoyed it…
    I didn’t even think of that lady and the decision she might make…She’d better leave the man alone with his beloved!:D

  5. leila says:

    it was magnificent. you described his feelings wonderfully, not only his feelings, but also each and every word. the words used in your ending were chosen beautifully and sagaciously. great piece, great job!

  6. Erfaneh says:

    I liked it Shaahin;)

  7. dilmaj says:

    happy to see you here Shaahin

    at last you got a web for yourself!

    good luck with your study and your web

  8. Rahil says:

    I posted mine on my weblog! Come and reas it if you like!;)

  9. niloofar says:

    wowwwwww that was really some thing!

  10. Shadi says:

    Interesting! we are potential murderers. I made the lady and the hero end up dead, actually killed by Princess, but another question is another story.

  11. parastoo says:

    It was realy awsome ,written literally!
    was I in her shoes I would say :
    jahannam dg zanet misham ba kalle!!

  12. Fariba-Rufuyan says:

    Wow.. it was really amazing .. Your incredible choice of vocabulary and illustrating feelings impressed me.. well-done Shahin:D
    and ending with another question was awsome..lol..

  13. Fereshteh Najafi says:

    it is interesting Shahin!

  14. Bahare says:

    During all the endings, I’ve heard, it was really some thing! you described the lover’s felling very touchable as if it was your own feelings!!
    My poor lover gone blind by the lady came out of the door but at lease reached his princess!
    I think after all, It’s too late for admiring your ending, it’s been almost a month!

  15. Rahil says:

    hey dude!! why don’t u put sth new on your blog? it’s really the time u know… :-D

  16. Rahil says:

    HAPPY BIRTHDAY!!! I wish u the best :-D

  17. دانشجوی از سلف گریخته ی آرام در محوطه says:

    Happy Birthday !!

  18. Rahil says:

    Happy New Year!! You’ve been invited to that game :-D

  19. pickel1991 says:

    i think this is a great addition to the story that not even the author himself would have come up with.
    personally if i were to make a new ending it would be something like this, “the man opens the door and sees a beautiful woman coming his way, but his love for the princess held him from embracing her. that night when the newly weds went home, the man slipped out a knife and stabbed her to death. the king heard of this disturbance and ordered him back to be judged yet again. the princess again motions hims to the door with the woman and he is yet again married. but he would not give up, surely he would kill every woman in the kingdom until all who was left was the princess to be put behind the door. just as the man planned this happend…
    but in lack of thought, whne the princess was being the door, who would motion him to her…
    what door would he choos, the princess… or the tiger

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